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Question: How effective were English kings in establishing royal control in England during the High Middle Ages and what methods did they use to achieve royal control?
The Introduction to a history
essay should include, in this order…
2. Mention of the time period (always important in a history essay).
3. A thesis (the answer to the question). This is the point of the essay.
4. An organizing statement that indicates the main ideas
you will develop in your body paragraphs to prove your thesis.
The Body Paragraphs should
include…
1. Topic sentences that state the main idea of each paragraph and link each main idea to the thesis of the essay. A topic sentence says how or why the main idea proves the thesis.
2. Develop the main ideas through relevant general statements.
3.
Support general statements with specific evidence, examples,
and quotations;
4. Provide
transition to the next paragraph.
The Conclusion should…
1. Bring the reader back to the thesis of the essay, but avoid merely repeating the introduction.
2. Avoid summarizing the entire contents of the essay, but touch on the main ideas.
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Focus
Correction Sheet: WESTERN CIVILIZATION H
Introduction
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1. Establish a time
context.
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2. Work on a clear
but succinct overview of the topic
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3. Take a clear
stand in your thesis that answers the question.
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4. Include an
organizing statement that states the main ideas of the body paragraphs.
Body
Paragraphs
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5. Topic sentence
does not make the main idea of the paragraph clear.
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6. Topic sentence
does not link the main idea of the paragraph with your thesis.
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7. Topic sentence
does not state how or why the main idea proves the thesis.
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8. Support your
general statements with evidence.
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9. Explain the
significance of your evidence: do not allow it to stand without explanation.
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10. Poor choice of
supporting evidence.
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11. Paragraph
includes material not related to the main idea of the paragraph.
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12. Paragraph does
not develop the topic adequately.
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13. Work on a
logical organization of ideas in your body paragraphs.
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14. Express your
ideas with greater clarity.
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15. Define critical
terms.
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16. Quotes need a
lead-in phrase and follow-up commentary.
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Make better use of primary sources to support your main ideas.
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18. Edit quote
appropriately and maintain grammar.
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19. Use
transitions to connect ideas within paragraphs and to link paragraphs.
Conclusion
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20. Remind the
reader of your thesis.
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21. Do not merely
rewrite your introduction.
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22. Recall the main
ideas of your essay without repeating the body paragraphs.
Style,
Grammar, Spelling
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23. Do not use slang or informal language
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24. Correct grammatical lapses.
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25. Correct spelling errors.
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26. Fix awkward expressions.
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Do not use first or second person (singular or plural).
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The Domesday Book, 1086, From The
Anglo-Saxon Chronicle
The king spent Christmas with his councilors at Gloucester, and held his court there for five days… the king had important deliberations and exhaustive discussions with his council about this land and how it was peopled, and with what sort of men. Then he sent his men all over England into every shire [county] to ascertain how many hundreds of 'hides' of land there were in each shire. He also had it recorded how much land his archbishops had, and his diocesan bishops, his abbots and his earls, and--though I may be going into too great detail--and what or how much each man who was a landholder here in England had in land or live-stock, and how much money it was worth. So very thoroughly did he have the inquiry carried out that there was not a single 'hide,' not one virgate of land, not even--it is shameful to record it, but it did not seem shameful for him to do--not even one ox, nor one cow, nor one pig which escaped notice in his survey. And all the surveys were subsequently brought to him.
William I as King, From The
Anglo-Saxon Chronicle
King
William was also held in much reverence. He wore his crown three times every
year when he was in England: at Easter he wore it at Winchester, at Pentecost at
Westminster, and at Christmas at Gloucester. And at these times all the men of
England were with him, archbishops, bishops, abbots and earls, thanes and
knights. So also was he a very stern and wrathful man, so that none durst do
anything against his will, and he kept in prison those earls who acted against
his pleasure. He removed bishops from their sees and abbots from their offices,
and he imprisoned thanes, and at length he spared not his own [half-]brother Odo…
This Odo was a very powerful bishop in Normandy…and him did William cast into
prison.
Amongst other things, the good order that William established is not to be
forgotten. It was such that any man...might travel over the kingdom with a bosom
full of gold unmolested; and no man durst kill another, however great the injury
he might have received from him.
The Salisbury Oath, From
The Anglo-Saxon Chronicle
2. We decree also that every freeman shall affirm by oath and compact that he will be loyal to king William both within and without England, that he will preserve with him his lands and honor with all fidelity and defend him against his enemies.
Henry, by the grace of God, King of the English, to the Archbishop of Canterbury, bishops, abbots, earls, barons, justices, sheriffs, and all his faithful, French and English of all England, greeting.
Know ye that I have granted to my citizens of London, i.e., to them and their heirs from me and my heirs that they shall ferm [pay a tax directly to the crown] for ,300, so that those citizens may choose any sheriff they wish for themselves and any judge they wish for themselves to hear of pleas of my crown [hear cases] and decide them; and let no other judge be over these men of London. And let no one take lodging within the walls of the city, nor shall my vassals [nobles] take hospitality by force. And let all men of London and all their goods both throughout England, and in harbors, be free of …all other [feudal taxes].
Dialogue of the Exchequer, 1177
IX. What Scutage is and Why it is so called.
Occasionally it comes to pass that by the machinations of enemies the country is thrown into confusion and there is rebellion in the country. Then the king decrees that a certain sum be paid from each knight's fief, namely, a mark or a pound, whence come the pay and gratuities for the soldiers. For the king prefers to thrust into the vortex of war mercenary troops rather than domestic forces. And so this sum is paid in the name of shields and is therefore called scutage. Moreover, they who sit at the exchequer are quit of this. [Note: The Dialogue of the Exchequer is medieval essay describing all that went on at the bi-yearly meetings of the exchequer (the treasury of England) officials, and branches out into a description of all the sources of revenue of the English crown.]
Edward I--Confirmation of the Charters, 1297
Edward, by the grace of God, King of England, Lord of Ireland, and Duke of Aquitaine, to all those that these present letters shall hear or see, greeting. Know ye that we to the honor of God and of holy Church, and to the profit of all our realm that the Great Charter of Liberties …which were made by common assent of all the realm…shall be kept in every point without breach…that our justices, sheriffs, mayors, and other officials which under us have to administer the laws of our land, shall follow the said charters in pleas before them and in judgments in all their points…
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The reign of Henry I (1100-1135) is very significant from the standpoint
of royal administration. His ambitious military and diplomatic policies required
an endless flow of revenue for the building of castles and the hiring of
mercenaries. Henry and his ministers exploited the wealth of England to the
fullest. Henry's severity is a recurring theme in the Anglo-Saxon Chronicle:
1104: It is not easy to describe the miseries this land was suffering at
the time because of various and different injustices and taxes that never ceased
or diminished . . ..
1110: This was a very severe year in this land because of the taxes that
the king collected for the marriage of his daughter.
1116: This land and people were also this year often severely oppressed
by the taxes, which the king collected both in and out of the boroughs.
In
1125, discovering that his minters were producing adulterated coinage, the king
had them castrated and deprived of their right hands. Yet, paradoxically, the Anglo-Saxon
Chronicle observed of Henry on his death, "He was a good man, and
people were in great awe of him. No one dared injure
another in his time." In short, despite all his ruthless severity --or perhaps because of it --he enforced justice and kept the peace.
Justice could be lucrative to an English monarch. The profits of justice
constituted an important portion of the royal revenue, and it evidently occurred
to Henry that by extending the scope of the king's justice he could augment the
flow of money to his treasury.
Henry's
reign witnessed a notable growth in the royal judicial system and the royal
administration. His chief administrator was Roger, bishop of Salisbury, one of
the great architects of medieval English government. Roger is the first man
known to have held the office of chief justiciar in England, who was empowered
to supervise the royal administration and act for the king in his absence. The
emergence of the chief justiciar, together with related administrative
innovations, has been regarded as marking the rise of impersonal government --of
government capable of functioning without direct royal supervision, a highly
significant step in the direction of administrative sophistication.
Along
with the rise of the justiciar, two additional administrative institutions of
the highest importance emerged under Henry I: the traveling justices and the
exchequer. The traveling justices were royal officials who toured the
countryside trying important cases in the shires and thereby greatly enlarging
the scope of the king's justice. When one of Henry's traveling justices was
present, the shire court was transformed temporarily into a royal court, and
ordinary people of the countryside were for the first time brought face to face
with the direct judicial authority of the crown. In the years of Henry I the
countrywide tours seem to have been spotty and unsystematic, but they were the
vital
The
exchequer was a royal accounting bureau, permanently stationed at Westminster
regardless of where the king might be. It was therefore an important element in
the "impersonal" government that was now emerging. The term
"exchequer" is derived from the table around which the officials
worked. The surface of the table resembled a checker board, being divided into
columns representing various denominations of money. Markers were placed on
these columns to represent the accounts of sheriffs who reported
Henry I put together a remarkably efficient royal administration—the
most efficient seen in northern Europe since Roman times. No northern European
king was as wealthy as Henry I, for Henry had discovered the positive
relationship between the efficiency of a government administration and the size
of the king’s revenues. He was fully alive to the fact that strong government
was good business.
Henry II reigned for thirty-five
years (1154-1189), almost exactly as long as his grandfather, Henry I. The
two reigns are similar in many respects, for Henry II undertook quite
deliberately to revive his grandfather’s policies and strove to rule in his
tradition.
The growth of towns and commerce was a factor of real importance in the
reign of Henry II. Money was becoming more and more abundant. Town life,
centering on the supervised town market, was still rustic and parochial by later
standards, but it was growing steadily more vigorous. Increasingly, town
government was dominated by merchant guilds or market guilds, those within and
without the town who were privileged to sell goods in its market. Towns such as
Bristol, Newcastle, Northampton, and, above all, London were becoming
significant commercial centers. The monarchy, recognizing their importance,
granted them charters containing valuable privileges, such as the right to
operate a borough court, freedom from customs and tolls, and various commercial
monopolies. Henry I had granted his Londoners the privilege of appointing their
own sheriff, and by the early thirteenth century they were allowed to elect
their own mayor - which they have
been doing ever since. In general, English burghers were recognized as a class
apart, free of the obligations of feudalism: “A
burgher [town dweller] can give or sell his land as he pleases and go where he
wishes, freely and undisturbed." (From the Customs of Newcastle—the royal
charter granted to the city of Newcastle.)
Henry II reorganized the method of collecting taxes by changing the basis
on which taxes were assessed. Before
Henry II, taxes were assessed on the old method: how much land you owned. This
method failed to recognize that amount alone was not always the best measure of
an individual’s wealth. Henry’s new tax was assessed as a percentage of a
subject’s annual income from rents or from trade.
It
was in the field of law, above all else, that Henry II made his unique
contribution. Indeed, he has been called, perhaps without exaggeration, the
father of the English Common Law. Here again he followed in the tradition of
Henry I, but many policies that Henry I had merely begun his grandson carried to
consummation.
In
the days of Henry II the royal court significantly increased the range of its
judicial activities and the complexity of its organization until, by the reign's
end, a number of separate bodies were hearing cases in the king's name. The
Great Council--the assembly of lords and bishops that met with the king on
extraordinary occasions - served as the royal tribunal in cases of the very highest importance,
cases such as the trial of Archbishop Thomas Becket in Northampton in 1164.
Cases of lesser significance were usually heard by the Small Council, a group of
traveling administrative officers and royal officials who served the king. The
Court of the Exchequer, meeting twice annually at Westminster, served as a
tribunal in cases involving royal finance in addition to its work in fiscal
administration and accounting. Henry II took the further step of establishing a
small body of royal justices to sit permanently at Westminster with the power of
hearing all but the most important cases that might be brought before it. This
court, the Court of Common Pleas, consisted sometimes of five men, sometimes of
more, and often included the chief justiciar and the treasurer.
The
system of royal tribunals --the Great Council, the Small Council, the exchequer court, and the Court
of Common Pleas--was augmented by a
Henry
II was determined to expand the royal authority and uphold the royal peace
throughout the English countryside. Much of his power in the counties depended
on the loyalty and effectiveness of his chief local agents, the sheriffs. In
1170 he undertook a
Henry II was still faced with the formidable problem of maintaining local
law and order without a police force. In 1176, he ordered that juries of twelve
men from each county and four men from each town be required to meet
periodically. These juries were obliged to report the names of notorious local
criminals to the king's sheriff or traveling justice. These juries were
fundamentally different from the modern trial jury. The task of the modern jury
is to decide whether the accused is guilty or innocent. His juries were closer
in spirit to our present grand juries; they were indictment juries rather than
trial
Henry I and Henry II, between them, achieved an enormously
significant extension of royal jurisdiction at the expense of feudal and local
justice. The various local, feudal legal customs were
giving way to a uniform royal law, a
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