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Chapter
before chapter one
It's holiday season again.Sarah and Junne are
discussing in the old
shed.It is their office called 'The 911 J.S.A office'.They called
themselves 'the 911 J.S.A detectives' but they haven't got any mystery
or even a case until now.
'Sarah.....Sarah....it's me, Junne ! ( Open the door ) I know it's
unlock
so I'll open it by myself,'
shouted Junne, cheerfully.
Sarah, the girl from Kuala Lumpur ogles at the door but
she doesn't
care. Her pretty face looks pale and sad.
'Sarah, good morning !,' greeted Junne .
'Yea bad morning. This evening you'll die,' answered sarah joking .
'I do hope! Ops, I mean I'm never gonna hope. Fuh! What's wrong with
you ? I got a happy news but....I won't tell ya,' said Junne 'However
I'll tell
ya. You wanna know ? '
'Happy news ? Why not,'Sarah really wanna know it .
Surely, Junne's gonna think twice before tell what she got.
Yesterday she told Sarah that she had caught a rat,
which had been jailed after killing earthworm in the court.
'You farted yesterday,right?,' whispered Junne just joking, early in the morning.
'What?,' asked
Sarah .
'Nothing. I just said that my frog miss missipy. I mean
you. Kah ! Kah ! Kah !,' Junne answered as fast as she can .
If the date wrong,Perhaps Sarah has taken out a gun.
That time Junne has to hide in the den,
hope won't meet any monkey man,
or she'll run to kidnap mr.Dawbarn . Back To Top
'Pardon,' joked Sarah.
'Anybody home? I got a letter for Sarah,' there is a loud shout outside.
'Come in sir,' answered the girls in their daily naughty voice.
' Thanks,' 'Yea you're welcome,'
'Please kambing,' said
Junne, smiled lengtly.
Suddenly Sarah laughting loudly, see a ghost perhaps,
but it's not like that.
'Yea, yea, yea please kambing, please come in,
kambing , kambing'
'What?,' asked the
postman,don't understand.
'Ups! We mean,come in sir,' cried Sarah.
Kambing is Malay word and it's mean a goat.Sarah and Junne are
both naughty, Sarah is more canny.
Before anything more happen,
Sarah open her mouth,
'Where's it? Thank
you mr.postman. Do you know what? You are the most hansome postman I've ever meet'
' Thanks,' the man
feels proud. His nose bloom and shrunken cos of
the praise.He
said goodbye and give a big smile before leave,
'I know I'm hansome,' he whispered. Just after the man's gone,
there are a burst of laughter in the room.
Loud not as a storm and not like a voice of a worm.
'Shut up Junne' 'you
too Sarah'
'ha,ha,ha,not funny of funky.ha,ha,ha,'
Junne glanced at the grandfather clock on the wall, Back To Top
'opps!it's too late now. Howevwe not yet. Oh my
god!'
'What is it ?,' asked sarah .
'Akaly will arive soon.We gotta go to the airport now.it's almost
8.30 a.m.Come on...,' Junne pulled Sarah out from the office.
'Yippie...Don't pulls me. Junne.....'
'I promise I won't pull you until you say you luv the cockroach....'
'Sorry junne i won't !'
They arive at the airpoart 20 minutes later. It's sobusy there.
Some people come to send someone,
and some are waiting for someone.
The young detectives seem to be waiting for nobody.
They have stood there almost an hour,
but the girl known as or named Akaly Lin does not appear or even
show her nose. Back To Top
'I give up I wanna go home....'
'Shut up sarah! what's the date today?'
'17th of January.why?'
'upps! I'm not sure if she'll arive today or tomorrow,' Junne smiles.
sarah stares at junne and says 'Junne, you know what? I'm proud of you'
'who me? No thanks. we'd better go now. come on...'
Suddenly Akaly called them 'hey,sarah, Junne! I'm here'.
There's nothing to fear, so they get their friend not the mose deer.
The three 911 fan are happy to be togather,once again.
'I'm sorry for making you waited for me too long.
I'd lost my ticket
so i've got to get another new one. that's why I'm late,' explained Akaly.
'we are not mind a lot. just a little bit. Oh ! i got a big secret
to tell ya.....'
'what is it?,' asked
Akaly before Junne finishs what she wanna
say. She is so curious about what Junne will say.'I've imported a frog
from uganda. Wanna take a look?,' answered
Junne, smiled lengthily again.
'Junne, I'll kill you.......'
'please try.I know you are not dennis the menace'
'you two gotta stop now. It's time to dig a big hole. It means
nothing except going back and having a rest,' sarah stoped them.
then they all agree to go home.
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Chapter One: A Morning In
'Gun's Farm'
'Emm...the cakes seem so delicious.It just makes my stomach cry
loudly and roar,' joked
junne 'If lee is here, I won't let him touch any
of them. I'm just kidding'
'Akaly, what are you looking at ?' asked Sarah .
'a yaw?,' Junne
said it again and again and again.
That is what they often hear from the girl.
'of course not. emmm....who has any plan ?'
asked Akaly, staring at
Jimmy's poster.
Then she takes a butter bottle.
Actually she wanna take
the sugar but cos of the picture, she took the wrong one.
'This is what we called sugar, Akaly,' teased Junne and Sarah, smiled
broadly. There are
three bottles on the desk. One is the butter
bottle, sugar bottle and salt bottle.
wonder what she'll take, the answer is milk.
'oh my trick does not work. Let's try another
one,' she lifted her
eyebrow to Junne.
Junne nodded as she
understood the sign 'akaly, have you ever met
Jimmy? he's becoming more handsome, I think,'
'They are all handsome. Of course I've met them....'
'Who's that? That's Jimmy, isn't it ?' lied Sarah, just wants to trick Akaly.
'Where,where?,' when she
looked outside the open window,
Junne took the chance to put some salt in Akaly's cup.
'good lies girl. However, what should we do after
this? Let's go shopping'
'No way! I mean yes way after I have a cup of coffee,'said
Junne, naughtly as usual .
'It is turn for Akaly to nod her head' so, please take mine. I treat
you'
'No thanks. That's your coffee. I'm sure I won't take it.,' cried Junne.
'We are friends ,right? so you should drink it,' added Sarah 'come
on, come on....Don't waste our precious time'
'Is anything wrong with it?'
'yes I guess no one can change the fate.'
bad luck for Junne,she has to drink it,
however it's better than eats a bat, it won't make her fat,
Sarah promises next time she'll put more salt,
so then it's gonna be more laught, she won't say but,but,but...
'Awas awak Sarah!'
Junne and Sarah are malaysian so they always speak
malay.
Akaly didn't understand why Sarah laughted at until Sarah told her.
It wasn't fair, angry for what for, they won't fear. Back To Top
'Laught, ha, laught. I wanna go riding. Don't
follow me,' sulked Junne.
'sorry we will. Nothing's gonna stop the rain'
'depend on you, none of my business'
In a few minutes they arrived to the Gun's farm. It's a apples'
farm which's got a big stable. The two girls chosed a horse for
themselves.
'Junne, wants any horse? Riding is so fun, you
know,' the farm's owner's
son came over Junne.
'Sorry I don't know cos I don't think so I know. I dunno how to ride
it. I gotta leave now. see ya,' explained Junne. She walked
toward the door
while someone with a great voice came in from the other door.
'Excuse me sir. I need horses for two.' Junne hears the great voice
again. She stopped and wondered 'I think i've heard the voice before. It's
like lee's voice. Perhaps, I'm wrong. I gotta go now' she did not look at
the back and lifted her legs again.
Outside, she did not see both of her friends.
As a bad morning for her, suddenly she slipped and fells,
'oh....' she sighed loudly.
Someone jumped down from a horse,
'Girl,can I help ya?' asked someone 'are you
okay?'
'No thanks but I can't stand. please....I....mean..I,er...mean, I
don't mean...anything..ya! That's what I err...mean...no, I think...'
'I'm lee.Calm down, calm down. I'll help ya,' as fantacy be
reality, hopes and wishes came true,
the one that always turns the girls on
is tanding in front of Junne.The cute guy gave a friendly, lovely
smile but the girl didn't know what she had to do. Back To Top
'are you okay?'asked the guy again.
'yea, yea, I'm fine, thanks. I don't know you and you don't know me.
I
think i gotta go now.bye'
'Wait I've not finished yet. I'm Lee. Who are you?,' asked Lee.
'A human like ya Mr. Brennan. Where's Mr. dawbarn?'
' There. First of all, tell me who you are. You said you don't know
me but ....'
' I'm Kav. They call me Kav. Actually I'm not supposed to know you
but I know
you. Sarah knows you too. Nice to meet ya. bye'
She just left the guy without answering his question.
'Hyya Junne! what are you thinking?' asked Akaly,
suddenly appeared with Sarah.
'Good to see you two again. I'm sure I've met
Mr.Brennan just now.....'
'Mr.Brennan ? where ? where ?' said Sarah, cheerfully
before Junne finished
her words.'I think
I know, see ya then' she saw the guy riding
toward
them. That's why she got the guy before the two.
Akaly suddenly disapeared.
Perhaps she went to look for a bread, as a magazine of a slight
headache, the one that caught the cold.
'Hi! Mr.Brennan,' greeted Sarah,'I'm Sarah. May I have
your autograph, please?'
'Hi! Sarah.Nice to meet ya'
Akaly didn't feel really comfortable and well,
and she needed to go to the toilet.
'Excuse me sir. Where's the toilet?'
'There,' a man showed the toilet with his finger.
People have to cross a bridge to get there.
' Thanks,' said Akaly.
She walked quickly to the pond there and stepped on
the bridge. It was made by wood.
'cross an old bridge,ha!' she's scared a
little if it would fractures. She walked carefully,
'one, two, three, dent. Male or female I'll
knock!'
'Pracck...,' the part
where she stepped on fractured !
'Aragh....fuh! I'm safe.who save me? Aragh...crocodile......,'
She shouted again when she saw a crocodile in the pond,didn't care
anymore who has saved her from falling into the water,
closing her eyes, holding tights to someone. Back To Top
'Are you alright girl ? Don't worry that's only a
machine'
' I'm okay.I'm....so sorry for the trouble. Thanks for saving me.
I'm
Akaly. You're Jim....,' she couldn't finish her
words, tongue seems to be
dumbs, she even couldn't move. How lucky she is today, saved by her
hero, it's a life new history, she looked happy.
'hello, I'm sure you know me and I think I know
you.You're Akaly of 911 HOTSPOT, right?' Akaly
is so excited 'emmm...I think so. How did you know?'
'You told me just now. I gotta go now. There's a party tonight, you
and
your friends must come over. I'll be happy to meet ya. bye, see ya tonight'
Jimmy gave an invitation card before leaving.
Akaly wondered if she's dreaming but she's not dreaming.
~ To Be Continued ~
Special Thanks: Junne Shanon
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