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  • Assignment #1:Mock trial portfolio

    Direct Questions:

    Simon

    1. What were you doing before you went to the beach?
    2. And what exactly did you want to tell them?
    3. When you arrived on the beach running towards the boys, what could you see?
    4. And about how big was the fire itself?
    5. So what portion of the beach was lit up?
    6. And what did Jack yell out when he saw you running towards him?
    7. At which point what did the other boys do?
    8. And what did they do to you when they came to you?
    9. What happened to your body after?

    Piggy

    1. What did you observe when you were at the feast?
    2. And what did Jack yell out?
    3. At which point what happened?
    4. Now what exactly did jack steel from you?
    5. How?
    6. What did you do about it?
    7. And while you were speaking to the boys, what did they do?
    8. And what eventually happened to you?
    9. What did Jack do after this?

     

     

    Cross Examination

    Jack

    1. You said during testimony that you had no intent to harm Ralph, correct?
    2. But Sam and Eric said that you were all going to hunt for Ralph?
    3. And every other time you hunted something, you killed it?
    4. You also chopped the head off of an innocent pig?
    5. Why?
    6. Why put it on the stick?
    7. How do you expect this jury to believe that you had no intent to kill Ralph when you’ve shown utter violence and a lack of contempt for life?
    8. You also claim in your testimony that you never screamed, “kill the beast”, inciting the mob that killed Simon?
    9. But there are three eyewitnesses how say that you did?
    10. You said you did in your affidavit, and you stand here today in front of this jury as a bald faced liar?
    11. What reason do we have not to throw out your entire testimony?

    Psychologist

    1. How long have you been in practice?
    2. And in all your years have you ever dealt with a situation like this?
    3. So you have no precedence for this event do you?
    4. And you based your finding on whose testimony?
    5. A convicted liar?
    6. And you took no one else’s account of what happened on the island?

    Closing Statement

    Today, there are three people in this trial. Two innocent children, brutally murdered on a tropical island and one man how has assisted and participated in these murders. A man who new right from wrong but willfully chose to break these rules when he stabbed Simon with a spear he made himself. Yelling at everyone to kill him and running with him in his rage. When he allowed his peers to run rampant and helped Roger when he murdered Piggy. When he hunted Ralph and burned part of the forest to the ground in his madness. Now, he takes the stand in his defense and willingly lies to us in order to save his own skin. Lies to cover up his guilt and let it wash away like Simons speared corpse. If you let him walk, then you let a killer go free and let the deaths of these innocent children be in vain. Bring justice to these boys and give them what they deserve. Don’t let his deceit take the better of you.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    Reflection

    I felt that the case went very well. I did not believe that we would win because we had no hard evidence and the entire case was based on the word of our witnesses against Jack’s word. I was however very fortunate in getting Jack to lie on the stand, which might have very well won the case. If he did not lie, we only would have been able to win on the counts of inciting a mob and accessory after the fact. I thought that all of our witnesses did well, although many of them did get a little messed up while on the stand. As for the defense’s witnesses, I thought they did a good job also, but I thought that the psychologist was very pointless and I really threw her testimony out of the jury’s mind. I think that the only thing I could have changed or done better was to do a better job at direct questioning. I did a very poor job because it was difficult not to lead the witness without having any hard evidence or affidavits. Without these materials it is very hard to prepare your questioning without doing the unethical. I might have also liked to have evidence and my own line of doctors to counter the defenses, but we must realize that this is a mock trial in English class. Overall I am happy with the outcome of the trial except for the fact that there were constant interruptions during my questioning and closing, which made it very difficult to perform.

  • Assignment #2: Rules Essay Rules
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    Rules and Their Necessity

    Daniel Febrer

    English

    Gokturk

    One of the many principles behind law is that without out rules and set parameters for the people within a society, those people will reach a degenerating moral state. This belief has been upheld in almost every organized society and many writers still put emphasis on its need today. Sidney Schanberg shows her opinion towards rules within a society in her essay entitled The Rules are all We’ve Got as does the book The Lord of the Flies, by William Golding. Schanberg writes about how New York City has become a place were no one respects the rules and how we are not far from a state of anarchy. The Lord of the Flies conveys Golding’s belief that without rules and authority, society breaks down to a point where even murder goes unpunished. Both of these works show us that when people don’t follow the rules, we create a state of chaos.

    Sidney Schanberg supports this thesis in her essay The Rules are all We’ve Got. She shows us how far society has fallen from our ideal perspective of it. A seventeen-year-old boy responded to a reporter when asked about his job, saying “I rob people. I like to rob people”. This shows how far we have really fallen from the tree. Children are supposed to be taught from birth how they should act and are given rules and boundaries to follow in order to prepare them for the rules of the real world. She also shows us how some of this downward trend is attributed to a lack of resources such as a drop in the amount of police officers. Without the figures of authority to enforce the law, then many people will break the rules without punishment, providing a feeling that it is okay to commit such acts. There are many examples of how far people have strayed from their moral standings that plague the city frequently. A man ran around slashing people while they slept on the street. One man walked Time Square half naked and disoriented before being harassed and taunted before falling onto the subway tracks. When compared to other industrialized nations, the break of morality in our society becomes more apparent. New York City has a murder rate of six per day and two thousand a year, while the much larger city of Tokyo has one murder every other day and a total of one hundred and eighty per year. Author Sidney Schanberg shows us the chaos that occurs when rules are not obeyed within a society.

    William Golding shows us a very similar message in his book The Lord of the Flies. When the boys first become stranded on the deserted island, they begin to form a civilization. Roger said, “Let’s have a vote!”(22) when they were trying to decide who would become chief. They began setting parameters and rules to maintain a sense of order. Jack said “… I’ll split up the choir… and we’ll be responsible for keeping the fire going”(43) when Ralph brought to the boys the matter of how they were to be saved and who would be in charge of keeping the rescue fire burning. However, soon this organization breaks down and they begin to ignore authority and lean closer to a state of total anarchy. Ralph said, “We all built the first one, four of us the second, and me ‘n Simon built the last one over there.”(80) when he was addressing the assembly about the problem with the shelters. Everyone had built the first shelter, but some people just stopped caring and ignored the rules to do what they wanted. The result was something that endangered the whole group, a poorly built shelter that would collapse when a storm came. Soon the situation worsened and they strayed so far from their own rules that they killed one of their own in a mob driven frenzy. They yelled “Kill the east! Cut his throat! Spill his blood”(152) as they brutally stabbed Simon various times while outfitted in a barbaric state of action and appearance. They then broke other moral codes by impaling a Pig’s head on a stick, stealing Piggy’s glasses and then murdering him and attempting to murder Ralph. By disobeying man’s moral codes and rules, Golding showed us how chaotic that society can be.

    When people begin to disobey and ignore moral codes and rules, society falls into a state of chaos and disarray. Sidney Schanberg shows us how this lack of contempt for rules has led to a downfall in the society of New York City. Golding also shows us in a model of society the effects that this disorder can have on individuals and society as a whole. Without people obeying codes and rules by which to live by, we begin to fall down a slippery slope of degenerating morals.

  • Assignment #3: Definition Essay

    The Definition of Phony

    Daniel Febrer

    Gokturk

    English

    Sometimes all of us call each other names in spite without an understanding of the insults that we throw. One word that needs such clarification is phony. A phony can be defined in comparison to the word fraud, which means someone that leads false intentions.

    A phony is someone whose actions do not reflect that person truthfully. An example of this is if you were to tell everyone that you were the greatest writer in all of history, when in reality you are not. In other words, it is someone who lies to other people to increase the level of recognition, respect, and other such qualities that people would display towards him. Phonies are dishonest, haughty, and very pompous people. They act in a very condescending manner and do anything to increase the way people view them, including crushing other people along the way to further themselves.

    An example of someone who would be the complete opposite of a phony is someone who does not try to lie in order to get ahead. This person would be honest and would care about the feelings of others, putting them at the same value that he or she would put herself. This person would not act pompous, or condescending like a phony, but would be very humble and grateful, and never brag. Other words that could be used to describe this anti-phony would be trustworthy, caring, and compassionate.

    Phonies are people who deceive you to make others think highly of them. They are dishonest and very mean towards fellow humans. Someone who would be the exact opposite of a phony is someone who is very caring and does not act condescending to anyone.

  • Assignment #4: Character Essay

    Guns, Cars, and the Life of a Top British Agent

    Daniel Febrer

    Gokturk

    English

    Would you like to live a life of fast cars, fast women, and fast action? Then this essay is for you. Society has revered the culture that the media has portrayed about the life of undercover agents and spies. This culture is embodied with an array of weapons, cars, and wealth that many people, such as myself, find alluring. One character in movies today that contains the essence of what a spy is like is James Bond. I, like many others, would love to have the opportunity to be the fictional character James bond for many reasons.

    One of the reasons people envy this character is because of how he looks. James Bond, as portrayed by the filmmakers, is a very suave and handsome individual. With his very flowing hair and trim British formal wear, it is no wonder why people make this generalization. He is constantly seen at places of high society, wearing his classic high-buttoned suit and only the best of shirt and tie combinations. Other aspects of his appearance are the characteristics of his physique. James Bond is a tall, muscular, European man with very broad shoulders and strong arms. He also has a rugged aspect to him, emphasized through the films in which he stars. Some people would like to be James bond because of his appearance.

    But there are other reasons why people like the character James Bond, such as his personality. James Bond is a very mature and masculine individual, but he also has a very boyish aspect to this to. He goes after women for sex and his own personal gain, he uses them and gets what he wants. Some people like this quality mainly because they wish that they could have the success that he does in his personal life. James Bond is also has very good instincts, as shown in the very risky missions and escapes which are shown in the movies. He is very intuitive and intellectual, and always can uncover the plot of an evil mastermind and quash it at his will. However, there are other reasons why people would want to step into the shoes of the master spy.

    Some of the reasons that I would want to be James Bond are very simple; guns, violence, cars, and money. The most top of the line weapons in the counter terrorist industry surrounds James Bond. His weapon of choice, a Walter PPK with optional silencer. Also in his barrage of equipment are watches with built in laser, detonator, and sometimes a dart gun. His belt disguises a 7-mm grappling line with hook built for swinging his weight across gaps in the floor. Along with his weapons, James Bond has some of the fastest and most well built cars on the market. BMW, Ferrari, Aston Martin and more are just some of the many cars he has too chose from. He also partakes in dangerous high-speed car chases and gunfights, which I would love to be a part of. Along with these reasons, I love the fact that he has almost endless wealth and as stated before I like the clothing in which he dresses.

    These are the reasons for which many others and I would like to step into the shoes of James Bond. His appearance and personality are contributing factors to this feeling. Also contributing to this are the many cars, guns, and missions which he has and takes place in. For these reasons and many more, I would like to be James Bond.

  • Assignment #5: Catcher in the Rye Final Project

     

     

    A CATCHER OUT OF PLACE

     

     

     

    Daniel Febrer

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    If you really want to hear about it, the first thing you’ll probably want to know is where I was born, and what my lousy childhood was like, and how my parents were occupied and all before they had me, and all that David Copperfield kind of crap, but I don’t feel like going into to it, if you want to know the truth. I’m not going to tell you about this madman stuff that happened around Christmas eleven years ago, I already told them that god knows how many times. You can go get their tapes or notes or god knows what else on what already happened. I’ll just tell you about what happened for me to come to out here and take it easy. I mean, that’s all I told Phoebe about, about why I’m here. Anyway, it all started when I left that place and went out to start a new life. My parents tried to get me into another school, but no one would accept me or anything. They’d always be calling and meeting with some goddam stiff-ass white collar about having their son attend this or that. Boy, they even tried to lie about what I did in the other schools to increase my chances. That’s one thing they did a lot, lie and conceal. That’s what they did when I was getting better. They would tell people I was just injured, spending time in the country, something like that. Sometimes they would- Well, anyway, as I was saying I was getting tired of those phonies so one day I just goddam took off, in the middle of the night. I went back to the city try to start over again. Headed over to the village, god knows why. Anyway I called a cab and in the front seat of the car was this really smug looking phony, with one of those tough attitudes to drive people away. I was trying to keep the laughter in, I swear.

    “Where to, bub?” he said with this indifferent tone.

    “Village”

    I looked around the cab to pass the time. Boy, it was dirty. I mean, you couldn’t even tell what the original color was it was so dirty. Tar, food, and other unidentifiable things you didn’t know existed. I wondered what the hell was going on in this cab before I hailed it. I bet some guy was messing around with his girl in there, laughing and having a laugh, telling some bull romantic thing he made up on the way, the phony, her saying “No, not now, not here…” while he was groping her. Boy, that must have been awkward for the cabbie.

    “Say, you ever seen anything weird going on while you were driving?” I asked

    “Huh.”

    “I mean in the back seat, anything like that?”

    “Look, pal”, It kills me when people say pal, “ if you’re tryin’ to make conversation you can forget it, and what the hell do you care anyway?”

    “Just Wonderin’.” I said.

    I kept on wondering. I thought about what I was going to do now that I was on my own. I mean, I just left my home with what appeared to be seven dollars and fifty-eight cents; I didn’t care. What was I going to do? I mean, I didn’t even know where I was going to sleep or whom I can ask for help.

    “Say, do you know of –,”

    “What’d I say before, bub, stop talkin’ to me, capish?” he said. What a phony. Who says “capish”? He must have seen some blowhart actor say it in a shoot’em up ganster movie and decided that people would like him if he said. Boy, that guy killed me. It was pretty damn depressing. Then, the car stopped. He grabbed the fare while he sped off, splashing some mud on my only pair of pants. The People on the street didn’t even care. They just kept walkin’ in the night to god knows where.

    I asked this guy at the crosswalk where people go to unwind at night. He was this really short man wearing tall boots, a black trench coat, and this brown derby. Around his neck was a very long gray scarf. He looked like he was worth a lot of money, but when he spoke he had this really thick Brooklyn accent. That killed me. He was trying to make everyone think he was taller and wealthier than he was, but you could tell. Anyway, he directed me to this bar and jazz club three blocks down. I thought that it would be a good place for me to let loose and think for a while. So I walked down to the club. It had one of those typical signs on the side. You know, the ones with chasing lights around the border and one of those flashing arrows pointing to the door. In the center of the chasers it blinked “Midnight Lounge” in formal cursive. Boy, they really thought they could make people come by writing it all fancy-like.

    When I opened the door, a giant plume of smoke came at me. I nearly flew back against the wall! Needless to say, the bar had a lingering haze to it. Everything was dimly lit, a few lights above the pool tables and the jazz ensemble, that’s it. The only other sources of light came from the cigar stubs in the mouths of men gathered around the bar and billiards and the long cigarettes of the women sitting at the tables. I was shown to a table near the back of the room, where all of the nobodies were. You know, the kind of people who sit alone because they have nowhere to go and no one to be with. They could sit at the bar and try to talk to someone, but they don’t even bother anymore. It made me really depressed.

    Anyway, I was sitting among these guys sitting with there heads at the bottom of their drinks, when I spotted this table of five girls about twenty feet away. It reminded me of that time years back after I was kicked out of Pencey. None of them were drop dead gorgeous, though. One was a sort of chunky woman in her thirties. She had a really phony smile and her laugh was so blatantly fake. Her lipstick was carelessly done and she had way too much eye shadow, as if she was trying to cover something up. Another three had a decent figure, but their legs were terrible. They were wearing stockings but I could even see the veins running up and down them. They made me feel pretty depressed. But one of them really caught my eye. She had this black hat that drooped over one side of her face. Her red hair cascaded with the shape of the hat, blocking most of her face. I waited until she turned to get a better glimpse of her. She flicked her hair back too reveal her true face. She was very pretty, if you need to know. She had creamy skin that was just like that of a child. Her lips were soft and full, almost as if never touched. And her eyes were a deep blue color, like the ocean or something like that. I watched for a few more minutes until she finally looked at me and smiled. I smiled back. We flirted like that for some time until the waiter came to take my order.

    “What’ll ya have, Mac?” the waiter said.

    “Double bourbon, on the rocks.” I said in this really smug voice, almost upper crest like.

    At that moment, the lady I was eyeing got up from her table and walked over. She stood next to me for a moment and looked around.

    “Is this seat taken?” she said, looking right into my eyes.

    “I hope not!” I tried to make a joke to impress her. It worked and she laughed. It was one of the most annoying laughs that I have ever heard. It slayed me. Nearly sounded like a thousand goddam sparrows chirping’ on cue. She sat in the chair and crossed her legs.

    “So how come I haven’t seen you here?” She said.

    “I’ve been in Europe on business.”

    “Really!” she said with sudden interest. “What is it that you do?”

    “I work for a British financial company. They hold offices here in New York and they needed me in London a week ago.”

    “What for?” She said.

    “Oh, well… They needed me to hammer out a deal with a Japanese exporter for us to manage their accounting.”

    “Wow, you must be pretty important.” She said

    We kept talking like that until my drink arrived. Man, I was so thirsty. I drank it all nearly at once while she was stroking my leg. It made me feel really nervous and uncomfortable. I looked at her and smiled, she smiled back again.

    “Hey, lets get outta here.” She said, “Lets go back to my place and see where the evening takes us, whadda ya say?”

    “No, I really shouldn’t –“

    “Come on, what’s the harm.” She said as she tugged on my jacket and rubbed my chest. That made me even more nervous.

    “No, I really cant. I’m leaving to Paris… with my wife.” I quickly said to get her to stop.

    She looked really upset. She took her hands off me and uncrossed her legs. Then after a few moments of silence, she got up and said “Tough break, kid” as she walked back to the table with the other girls. It was really depressing. I was so depressed I decided to leave and go back to the street for a cigarette, maybe to another club…

  • Assignment #6: Heart is a Lonely Hunter Task III Essay

    Lollipops for the Heart

     

    It is only natural that parents and their offspring share a special bond with each other. The relationship that is shared between father and daughter is described in the short essay "No More Lollipops" and in pages 83-86 of the novel The Heart is a Lonely Hunter, by Carson McCullers. Both works show us that the relationship between fathers and daughters is one of affection, of caring, and mostly on an emotional level.

    "No More Lollipops" provides an excellent outlook into the details of father daughter relationships. In her essay, Debra Adams gives us the feeling that the father and daughter all like best friends. She describes a game that they would play in the night where her father would carry her down the stairs on her shoulders and then pretend that she must have flown down. "And I would try to hide my laugh, and he would give me a little grin that meant this was our little secret." This shows how playful and comfortable they are around each other. Debra Adams also shows how much that she needed and depended on her father emotionally when she says, "It was time for me to… stop crying to him when I skinned my knee or didn’t get my way." She conveys how delicate and fragile that this relationship is by using a very succinct tone. Debra does not go into to any depth when telling her story, and does not reflect upon the feelings that were felt after the relationship ended, which shows how that now since she does not have the same relationship with her father she is somewhat devoid of feeling.

    In pages 83-86 of The Heart is a Lonely Hunter, Carson McCullers also describes the relationship between Mick and her father. This section describes an instance when Mick’s father called her to him. "Her dad just stared at her. She could tell he didn’t have any reason for calling her.". Mick’s father just wanted to see his daughter because he was alone, as inferred from the previous quote. This shows a type of dependence that each of them share on an emotional level. "I’m in no hurry, honest.". Despite the fact that Mick was in a hurry and needed to go somewhere else but instead decided to stay and keep her father company shows how the both of them lay on each other for support. Unlike Debra Adams, McCullers uses a very different tone. She makes it seem like the subject was very important to Mick and that despite her prior engagement, she was willing to break it off to give her father emotional support. She also uses the setting of a failing business and the beer to also convey the father’s loneliness.

    Both stories convey the relationships between fathers and daughters, but there are many similarities and differences between the two. Both of the two works detail this relationship as a highly emotional one. Debra conveys this when she describes how she runs to her father when she is in pain, and McCullers shows this when Mick gives her father company because she feels that he is lonely. Also, both works show how both father and daughter depend on each other. McCullers shows this when Mick’s father depends on her to give him company, and Adams shows this when she depends on her father to help her through pain and suffering. However, the two works are different in that Debra’s relationship ends abruptly and Mick’s keeps going.

    The essay "No More Lollipops" and pages 83-86 of The Heart is a Lonely Hunter both detail the relationships between fathers and daughter. McCullers and Adams both show the relationship as one that is on a predominately emotional level. However, Adams shows that this relationship deteriorates at a certain age, while The Heart is a Lonely Hunter shows it as perpetuating.

  • Assignment #7: Portfolio Reflection