So, if you're here is most likely means you're one of my friends, and you're going to critique this really great story I'm writing, that I actually hope to have published at some point.

Some of you will notice that certain characters and events are based on my life, or other people's experiences (write what you know...right?)

So, I hope you enjoy, and please be brutally honest.

Well, maybe not brutally...

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