"beautiful lack repair me"



Joe Safdie




Artificial Heart, by Peter Gizzi, Burning Deck, Providence,
1998, 93 pages, $10.00 paper.



Peter Gizzi's Artificial Heart is much concerned with frames, outlines, and the absences caused by their dissolution -- the emptying out of pre-conceived ideas and content -- "as sober jets empty the sky" (From a Field Glass). "Farther off / pedestrians make parallel lines and collapse / into distance" ("New Picnic Time") -- what's being noticed/noted here is that instant ("zero hour") when "an earth unwrites itself" and we become unsure of our perceptions, as "local color bleeds into the river" ("Mourning & Materiality").

But there's no real despair in this prospect, and indeed, if there is a dominant emotional tone in these accomplished poems, it's one of jauntiness -- Gizzi tracks through the hollows, as it were, for scraps (traces, echoes) of previous poetries (from the New Testament to David Byrne) that he can salvage to compose new songs. There are occasional hints at what might lie "beyond this image decomposing: desire / . . . uncanny earth. A funny thing to feel" ("New Picnic Time") but no real images or descriptions offered -- instead, there's an insistent distrust of prior representation, with the emphasis squarely on what's left behind when "The artifact in time fades / and we are left with a blank slate." ("Another Day on the Pilgrimage") The "repair" of such a condition is merely the activity of "working the long pencil / until groove become grove" ("Utopian Parkway").

Gizzi has also edited, this year, The House That Jack Built, a collection of Jack Spicer's lectures, and Spicer's concern for the invisible is much in evidence here. Indeed, the best gloss of these poems might be a curious bootleg edition of After Lorca, which shows the poet on the cover relaxing on an outdoor deck, and then, on the next page, cuts him out of the scene, with only the outline of his presence left behind.

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Joe Safdie's latest manuscript is The Story of O, a re-examination of the Orpheus myth. He lives and teaches in Seattle.




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